this was so good!! i loved it!!
things i loved:
1. the story being from her perspective. from the start it humanizes her. i also loved her insight into the man, and past his unreliable narration. i loved how tired she was of it, i live how pissed off she was.
2. the triple aspect voices. i LOVE LOVE LOVED this. so good. i loved that she had her own thoughts separated from indoctrination, but she still has her own voices of 'feminization', of gender roles. they were all distinct and voice acting was fantastic.
3. the man sucked hard. a really great job of making him suck believably, from the exaggeration of his accomplishments while also putting down those who accomplished wat he hasnt, to the misogyny towards his coworkers, to his anger at even having a female boss (who is already nice to him).
4. i liked that the woman ending ended with you getting you getting him lol. just leaving. it was perfect.
the only things id critque is
1. i really wouldve loved the three aspects to be labled in the dialogue history, as i had a hard keeping track of which voice was who, as i found four separate voices for one character difficult to keep track of (plus the fact that deaf players/players not using sound qould not get the benefit of this really cool nuance of her internal dialogue
2. it was very simple to keep him happy but also i do get why he would be, because all he wants is subservience and simple validation. so youre not faking a complex relationship. but it would be nice if the conversation felt a little more complex.
anyway, i loved the story, nice job, i hope to see other stories from you