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the beginning is extremely intriguing, but i think there is a distinct lack of personalization. For example, there is no way i would wake up rich with a sexy loving husband and just run away from that. its not like i got kidnapped, memory loss would be my first thought. but if i liked girlies, i probably would wanna run away, ykwim? itd be sick if there was options for your personality, like more curious people might stay whereas paranoid people would run, etc. also i noticed playing as a man that the only clothes mc wore was dresses, not super immersive breaking for me but could be for other people.

i honestly do really like this premise, i only offer this criticism because i hope it will be helpful.

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Hi 😄 Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me, I appreciate the thoughtful feedback <3  I think you make a really good point here! I wanted to release the demo as is to see if anyone would even be interested in the premise (and surprisingly, it seems like people are! 😄)  I would like to go back in and add other choices so that the gaming experience is much more personalized to player preferences when I have time, now that I know that people are actually interested in the project and it's not just a passion piece I'm writing solely for myself :P!

The dress discrepancy is something I fixed last night to where now players can choose what outfit they change into :) I just haven't uploaded that build to itchio yet 😄 Thank you for all the helpful suggestions! Part of why I love posting on here is so that I can get feedback like this to try and improve my project in areas I may be blind to. Please let me know if you think of any other suggestions!😄

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Of course!! This is such a healthy way to look at things that I honestly admire it. There is no doubt in my mind that the start of this demo is an AMAZING hook, and my excitement for more cannot be understated.

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Thank you, that's so kind of you!! ❤️And I'm so glad you like the hook of the demo😄 I can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next major installment, your feedback has been really helpful!😄