A fan VN of a fangame is a clever concept right away!

    The rough sketch style looks nice on the characters, especially with the detail and colors used. The backgrounds fill the space quite well, too.

    The music sounds nice, although some parts are completely silent. This can be good in sparse moments.

    The writing has various typos and other errors that somewhat distract from the reading. The ending also felt slightly abrupt, given the buildup - not to mention the presence of Kosuzu, the one who had a relationship question to begin with. Otherwise, it's a very straightforward but very sincere story that explores a relationship between Mystia & Kyouko.

    One of my favorite parts was between Mystia and Byakuren, talking out their misunderstandings and fears of each other.

    Despite the rough edges, it was a good read all the same. Well done!

It is very corny; that flirty, lovey dovey affection that is too much in your face, which makes you happy for the couple but at the same you go "I think I'm gonna leave." hahahaha but at the same time it feels earnest so I really had a nice and cozy time seeing the events unfolding and understanding how they got to had such a relationship. I hope to see more VNs or games from the team in the future.

My favorite part: After Touhou's Mystia Izakaya's game I always forget that Mystia is this punk girl with a lot of fight in her. I like the attitude she shows in this one. Rebellious Bird with a Dog with a big Moral Compass makes for a much more interesting duo than Lovely Bird and a Dog with Unconditional Love :3 (No Shade to Touhou's Mystia Izakaya, I have the DLC's on my waitlist XD)

Mystia Izakaya-based fanfic!

A rough-looking handdrawn artstyle that almost starts looking like painted art. It's hard for me not to appreciate it!
The way the backgrounds and characters are drawn look pretty sober despite of the colourful designs, it's really intriguing.

There are enough typos, syntax and grammatical mistakes to break the immersion...
Still, the story is well structured and very real. I especially loved when Mystia and Byakuren had a serious talk and clearing misunderstandings, it feels very nice to see the talk unfold into appeasement .
abrupt novel end - what a snap to reality it was when on one frame we were at the magical moment, then on the next frame we're just on the flat, silent title screen lol

Also Kosuzu is big enough to say swears, so don't worry girls and guys.