Mystia Izakaya-based fanfic!
A rough-looking handdrawn artstyle that almost starts looking like painted art. It's hard for me not to appreciate it!
The way the backgrounds and characters are drawn look pretty sober despite of the colourful designs, it's really intriguing.
There are enough typos, syntax and grammatical mistakes to break the immersion...
Still, the story is well structured and very real. I especially loved when Mystia and Byakuren had a serious talk and clearing misunderstandings, it feels very nice to see the talk unfold into appeasement .
abrupt novel end - what a snap to reality it was when on one frame we were at the magical moment, then on the next frame we're just on the flat, silent title screen lol
Also Kosuzu is big enough to say swears, so don't worry girls and guys.