Thanks for sharing, soups art style really stood out to me when I played it, and it's cool to see how you achieved the effect. As someone who also doesn't do much speaking, I know the struggles, but you spoke well! The best feedback I can give is just keep making videos and you'll improve each time as you get more used to it. I Another tip, I find cutting out when I leave a long pause or say "um" a lot helps make the video feel more engaging and makes me sound like I'm more of a professional speaker, but at the end of the day how you edit your videos is up to you ;)
Not sure if you have rated my game yet, but here's the link if you'd like to give it a try! You're Not Welcome to Rennville by Distant Dimensions