Hello~! No need to apologize! Thank you so much for your feedback and criticisms! They're very helpful and we appreciate it so much! Kalie and I will reconsider some design choices in color palettes and we'll work on consistency between sprite and CG art too!
I'd also like to thank you for your input on the font. As a visual novel, the dialogue and narration is important so I want to make sure you and anyone else can read it. Perhaps I can even look into programming font choices. I think Ren'Py can do something like that. If not, we'll try to choose a different sans serif font to keep the "office" vibe.
Also, we would love to have you onboard as a proofreader! Kalie and I, however, do not have funds to pay you so it's entirely volunteer-based. Please PM me @xxmissarichanxx on Twitter and I can give you more details about it if you're still interested! Since Kalie and I are both writers and artists for this project, our concern is consistency in both art and writing. We would be grateful for any help you can provide.
Sorry if I didn't address everything you've mentioned-- we still greatly appreciate the time you took to play and leave such great feedback! Everything you've mentioned and shared really helps and I hope we can make the necessary improvements to enhance yours and everyone's experience! Thank you again so very much for your comment and support!