This was a nice story! I liked all of the characters and the twist at the end. Although I do have to wonder, where was Desmond after he confronted Faolan? He obviously thought that you were being poisoned and once he thought he got rid of Faolan, he just vanished? And then the only other gripes I have were some grammar mistakes and that we didn't get a CG for that final scene XD (Not needed though, you described it well enough for my imagination to make a good scene.)
Well done!