I enjoyed this a lot! I always enjoy seeing works being produced that provide more lore to the world that they are working on right now, that isn't just shoehorned in somewhere in the main installment. And this was an interesting story to learn more about Liam and Patrice, granted I haven't kept up with the most recent updates so I don't know/remember if things that were mentioned here are already in the main story.
I loved the art for this a lot. The designs for the new characters are interesting and I loved the CGs. The animation at the end was really neat as well.
And there isn't anything I can find wrong in this that hasn't already been mentioned by others in the comments. Stuff like pacing, how the sprites sometimes default back to their neutral expressions, the unknowns like the croc, or what happened to Nia and how she is able to send that much money to both of them apparently every month, and the extreme horniness of the two.
Anyways, I just want to say I enjoyed this again and it gave me the urge to re-read Moonlight Castle and get myself immersed in the world again. Awesome work!