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Hello Chainsaw. Over the course of a handful of days I decided to go through pretty much all of the Gen 5 scenes that are out so far. I usually wait until the full generation's out for that, but I figured that it was worth appreciating it in detail now. I liked all of the scenes pretty well, and even with this many visible here each character still manages to feel distinct in little ways. Stuff like Bianca still speaking during her oral scene, Rosa's fixation on justice throughout, and the meta jokes of Shauntal's scenes help make everyone just unique enough while spreading attention out evenly.

Along the way, I tried to keep track of whatever typos I could find. I categorized them mostly based on what type of character the scene belongs to. I hope this helps, and that I didn't make too many strange mistakes while I was charting these. Anyway, time for a terror of a text wall.

Intro

1. In the Ch 5 Intro before Victini, there is a minor typo where "The bench under Lugia's butt creaks from the weigh." There is also one after Victini first speaks where "who's voice" should be whose.
2. When first seeing Victini in the intro there is a typo in the sentence "hushed whispers among your other Legends shows that they" where I think show shouldn't have an s.
3. When using Protect against Victini's overheat there is a typo where it says "the flames are back enough"
4. There's a typo in the last Victini intro bit before the chapter with the word you'll in "You'll hope you can figure out how to beat Victini"

Dragons

1. During the Druddigon in the tower, there's an extra space in the word she's in "Druddigon over there, she 's"
2. In the scene with N's room, there's a typo where it's meant to have the word are in "and the walls a covered"
3. In Reshiram's version of the Plasma Castle fight there appears to be an extra comma when protecting against her Blue Flare. It's in the phrase "you can feel, the heat washing around it". 
4. In Reshiram's Battle Breeding scene, the word quiet is mispelled in "Zekrom keeps quite and just smiles."
5. After the Reshiram Battle (possibly the Zekrom version too?) the words their and they're seem to be swapped in "Zekrom and Reshiram have stopped cuddling, their posing on the bed". That one might be a matter of comma confusion with the remainder of the paragraph though.
6. In the White Kyurem version of Kyurem's breeding scene, there are two lines where Reshiram uses Zekrom's color starting in "Ah my pride and joy, all mine again!" 
7. I think there's something up with the Zekrom anal in "Zekrom shuffles a bit adjusts her huge tits", most likely a missing word. This is sketchier, but I think in the same scene the word that should be as in "I don't think she'll ever get as much cum out of him that I do out of you."
8. The words of and or are swapped in the Reshiram pussy side scene in the line "either jerking off of fucking"
9. In the Kyurem pussy scene she says "Don't tease me Master, I must just find the energy".

Meloetta

1. There's a plurality typo when you click on the link leading to Meloetta in the line "...very few Legendary Pokemon who's been willing to show herself in front of Human,"
2. There's a typo for the word thought in the Wings option on the 3rd theater escape option in "I never would have though of a make-up attack"
3. The word as is incomplete in Meloetta's Pirouette Mouth scene in the line "soaked hands over your shaft a she"
4. Send is in the wrong form in Meloetta's Piouette Anal scene in "My fans used to sent me"

Swords

1. In the first Virizion explore scene, there's an error on the machete option where it says "dodging them until the run out"
2. In the Virizion breeding scene, there are a typos in the lines "Virizion stands up strait again" and "might have been what tipped her over the edge and make her climax"
3. After the breeding scene, Virizion is mispelled one time as "Verizion." Classic one there.
4. When using the Climbing Gear at the first Terrakion exploration, the word yank is in the wrong form in "grip tightly to the Rope and get yanks off"
5. Missing apostrophe in "Terrakions soft stretched belly" on her breeding scene.
6. There is a typo on the Haxorus in Cobalion's exploration when you choose the flashlight, "The the Haxorus's surprise"
7. In Cobalion's breeding scene there are typos where it says "I suggest start my service by carrying your children!" and "you cum starts leaking out". There's also line where she says "worth her metal," instead of mettle but since she's a steel type that works as a pun.
8. In the first-time prelude to the Sword side scene, Cobalion says "may be found in this hotel, I was present another assessment" and I assume that was should be a will. The wrong too is used in "much to close" in the same prelude
9. At the end of Terrakion's version of the sword side scene, the word finish is once mispelled in "as you finsih" towards the end. Shortly after this two words are melded together as "cocksas"
10. Virizion is called Verizion once in the Keldeo intro.
11. In Keldeo's breeding scene, shown is in the wrong form in Virizion's line "Our Lord has show me..."
12. There are missing commas when first entering Keldeo's side scene in "Cobalion Terrakion and Virizion shout " and what seems like a missing word in "You sigh with smile". 
13. When choosing variants of Keldeo's side scenes, it says "Gte wet and slippery"
14. In Keldeo's Mouth scene the word hygiene is mispelled in "Hygene is more important", and starts is in the wrong form in "a river of jizz start shooting up"
15. In Keldeo's Anal scene the word her is repeated in "the smile her her face"

Genesect

1. In the second Genesect exploration scene, smashed is in the wrong tense in "there's documents and computers, lots of them are torn or smashes, "
2. On the last Genesect exploration scene, there's some sort of typo with the letter a when using the climbing gear in the line "You tie your rope a thingy"
3. When meeting Genesect the word she'll is in the wrong form in "if you can just talk for a while then she's see"
4. After Genesect's breeding the word is needs to be swapped with it in "it makes a metallic CLANK before is sucks"
5. In Genesect's pussy scene, the word alloy is word swapped in the phrase "what kind of allow she's made of"
6. There's a capitalization error early in Genosect's mouth scene where it says "MEtal Polish", the line "its dripping with some kind of fluid" should use it's, and the word it is swapped with is in " as is steadily reaches the floor".
7. In Genesect's ass scene the word they is incomplete in "I don't know why the built me", and the word is is needed in "Why my battery a fucking G-Spot?!" In addition the is should be an are in "the fumes from the polish on your hands and on her butt is". I think the word think was intended when Genesect says "I don't I was anyWAAAY!"

Victini

1. In Victini's anal scene, there's some form of grammar error in the middle of the line "Victini lets out a pre-victory laugh as her she keep bouncing her booty on your rod". Hard to pin that one down.
2. Victini's oral scene has the word seem incomplete in "that doesn't see to stop her"

Humans

1. During the initial Iris breeding scene, there is a typo in "hands on her butt as the throws" for the word "she."
2. Returning to Iris, there's at least one extra word in the phrase "her pussy and asshole are both pussy and wet with"
3. In Iris' oral scene the word "sent" seems to be a typo in "Iris's words vibrate through your shaft and sent you over"
4. A word is missing in the Iris pussy scene in the phrase "quickly shift your hands down to ass,"
5. The word "until" got swapped with "up" in Iris' anal scene in the line " I do not stop working up my partner is one hundred percent satisfied!"
6. When you go back to Hilda, there's a typo with "or where you hankerin'". Or, that one might actually be her accent.
7. In Hilda's pussy scene there are a couple errors with the word your, " each time your slap into it" and "and gently nudge her shoe with your," where the latter doesn't say what of yours is used.
8. In the initial Anthea and Concordia the word wobble should have an S at the end in the phrase "her huge ass wobble freely"
9. In the Anthea and Concordia pussy scene there's a typo with "your boobs are so big I can't get any close,". At the end of that scene, and I believe all of them, there is a typo with the phrase "and their can't cover themselves properly"
10. In Anthea and Concordia's anal scene there's a series of incomplete HTML color tags for Anthea after "Concordia's smaller butt rubs over her." These all show up as "span style="color:LightPink">" with the left bracket missing. During one of these it says "one thing I;'m sure" with a semicolon. There is also a typo with "angle your cock so it slide up"
11. In the Anthea and Concordia mouth scene the word squeezed is in the wrong form in "they're being squeezes nice and tight "
12. In Rosa's initial scene the line "to at least as her what's wrong" has a typo.
13. Rosa's name is uncapitalized in her pussy scene at "You think that rosa might be stretching that metaphor a bit"
14. In Rosa's oral scene it should probably say your in "Rosa moves her hand from your shaft to her balls", and the word start is the wrong tense in "Rosa lets go of her hat and start groping"
15. On Roxy's mouth scene it mentions "her drool coaked lips".
16. In Roxy's anal scene there's an unusual typo in the line " shove your cock fully into as asshole"
17. Before showing Shauntal Keldeo, there are typos in "metting actual Gods in Sinnoh", "all the details of you story", and "the one who's home" needing to be whose for possessive form.
18. There is a typo in Shauntal's anal scene where "she gives on of her cheeks a slap"
19. After Shauntal's repeatable scenes the wrong here is used in "It's been lovely having you hear"
20. I think in Shauntal's oral scene the word offer is incomplete in "you off to hold them for her"
21. In Shauntal's repeat pussy scene the word use should be singular in "I could always uses a refresher".
22. In Lenora's initial scene, it says "You got over the whole story again", there is a stray # at the phrase "even if she can't go on display in this condition...#", and there is a typo in "and smiles ad you work together"
23. Before Lenora's repeatable scenes, the word than is swapped away in "I bet you've got something more exciting that dusty old bones"
24. In Lenora's oral scene, I think the word one is unfinished and that squeeze is the wrong form in "she slides on hand into her blouse and squeeze her breast". There's also something where the word as should be at in "Genesect jumps a little with surprise as the swiftness at which your meat was devoured,"
25. In Bianca's initial scene the word ample is swapped in " her amble behind"
26. Bianca's anal scene has a missing t for thought in "I though I was just relaxing really well!"
27. In Bianca's pussy repeatable scene, the word on goes against the sentence's meaning in "he's missing out on letting a cutie like Bianca out of his grasp". There is also a missing r for your in the line "you wide knot slips in and out"
28. In Juniper's initial scene there's a missing word in "and letting bounce around in front of you,"
29. Juniper's oral scene has the word vibrates in the wrong form in "her throat vibrate around your cock"
30. There's a dropped r in Juniper's anal scene in "as you immense meat". There's also an apostrophe needed in "You grin and pull Junipers ass"
31. Juniper's repeatable pussy scene has the wrong you're in "your moaning too much to get your words out"

PWT

1. In the Misty PWT scene there are typos in the lines "there was a few time when", "so tightly against you that her body and your are", "she quickly gets what she wanted and your start"
2. The Sabrina PWT scene has a typo with "Don't feel back," shortly before her second picture.
3. In Clair's scene, it says "This guy really our Dad, I can't believe it!"
4. There's a punctuation typo in Jasmine's scene in the line "I wonder if he bought her with him>"
5. At the start of Witney's scene there is a missing word in "A voice calls out through the crowd, you something angry and pink"
6. The small letter/tense swap in Flannery's scene, it says "Men always loves my tits" when it should be loved based on the context.
7. In Liza's scene there appears to be a missing word in "and standing before in all her naked glory"
8. In Roxanne's scene the wrong form of shimmy is used in "and shimmy's her butt"
9. There are a couple errors at the start of the Winona scene in the line "the crowd aren't looking at it, their attentions" where aren't should be isn't and attention shouldn't be plural. It also says "Mr. Guy-Who's-Name-I-Keep-Changing-And-Keep-Forgetting!" where who's should be whose. The r got cut off of your in "Winona smiles as you Altaria cock", and there're some extra words in the line "It's amazing that when it with it feels like I'm flying". There's a missing t in "it's no necessary but you're both enjoying it!" and some is unfinished "you grope her boobs so more". Finally, the word at is unnecessary in "making me at one with the clouds."
10. In Candice's scene there's a letter swap that changes the word better in "you wish you could get a batter look at it".
11. In Maylene's scene the line "but you'll still have trying" has some form of typo. There are a few different fixes that'd work  but I can't guess what you'd prefer.