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This was a banger of a vn. I was so immersed throughout the entire story, trying to figure out why he had done it (I already suspected it was going to be them >:)). I didn't expect what the real cause of it was though.

Now I have some gripes I should probably mention. While I liked the story I felt as if there were some key emotions that were left out of it. Say the panic and grief that would have consumed skipper and the MC. To the MC not having more of a breakdown after having major events happen back to back that trigger very different responses. And then some of the plots of the story that seem important, aren't really. For example, if you take the branch in the story where you take the flashdrive from the envelope, and then keep it, and from what I understand in the story it would essentially fuck the antagonists whole plan up. I say that because when they are explaining how they did it they said that they used that flashdrive to take over the electrical system. And yet, they didn't need it.

But again these are some very minor complaints and I really enjoyed it. Really well done!

Thank you so much for reading and for the very kind feedback!! And seriously, thank you for sticking with some of the rougher or more rushed parts haha--means a lot you still had a good time with it :)