Well, you made it. You took a topic everyone has at least thought about and played in their minds, and yet you have made it so beautifuly that the sweet jazz song still haunts my head like a reminder of a slow, bittersweet ending. I believe it is executed very well, didn't get boring at any moment, nor I felt I was missing something specific. The visuals are pretty, and the expressions in those eyes got to my soul.
A very beautiful piece of work all around!