The fit on this is excellent. I've been spoiled a lot by these entries, so there are a few places I can see room for improvement. I couple moments in the shimmer/ sleigh bells sounded out of place, a swell that didn't go as big as it could... a place where an instrument came in loud instead of starting quieter and ramping up. A bit at the end where it felt you were rushing the ending... Just tiny, tiny things.. Overall really very good.
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Thanks for the kind words and the feedback! Yeah, there were definitely some moments dynamically that I wish I could've had time to fix, and I'll likely go back after the jam to make some tweaks so that there are bigger contrast between the highs and lows throughout the piece. As far as the ending goes, I would've loved to extend it a bit and let it breathe a little bit longer, but the 2 minute time limit for jam submissions prevented me from doing so haha. I figured I could either cut that harp outro entirely, or just start it a little bit earlier and not have a big ritardando at the very end. I liked the harp outro, so I opted for the latter option haha. But that's another detail that I'd love to stretch out a bit when I revisit this piece after the jam ends! Thanks again for listening!