This was a lovely story! I'm a sucker for stories where the cold stoic warms up to his love interest. The interactions between the two main characters were really sweet and I really like the ending. The storybook tale had pretty visuals. I think the biggest issue is that the prose is weak and there were a bunch of grammatic errors. I also do think it would have been better if the romance took place in a longer time span. As it stands, it's a bit unreasonable for someone to believe that a romance unfolded with only a few days. Other then that, I really liked this VN and I would definitely recommend reading.