Some criticism, it feels like there is NO build up in the beginning, i cannot tell what kinda story you’re trying to tell because it feels like this is rushed so you can get to the main plot, especially since this is a demo. The MC has all the WORSE options, does the worst actions, and kinda just?? Doesn’t feel like her own character neither us, just really,, bland in a way? its like the MC has no personality whatsoever, and when it comes to Daniel.. he also feels kinda bland, too easy to provoke which wouldn’t be bad if it wasn’t for the fact he immediately gets to assaulting us.. idk?? It’s like, whats the story? This doesn’t make this interesting at all if i just know BOTH OPTIONS IN THE BEGINNING OF THE GAME ARE THE SAME THING. Okay demo though i guess?
Viewing post in wh4t 1 w0uldnt d0 PROTOTYPE comments
Well, yeah, you're right--obviously that is stated in the beginning. But that doesn't automatically mean no one can provide polite, constructive criticism because they wish for the game to be improved BECAUSE there will be a final version. There's no need to be rude... Be a little bit kinder. Life is better that way. :)