Interesting concept. A little rushed as all girls are pretty much the same (I understand it's a first release go show the idea), they just go along quickly and pump themselves full. But with more varied content, this ought to become really good. 👍
Maybe sneak in an actual mystery pregnancy. 😋
Keep it up. 😊
It's your vision, you do you. I'm just some random dude in the comment section. 😊
What I meant is that all characters seem to behave/talk like they're pretty much the same person. Nothing wrong with that, just doesn't feel all that varied to me.
If you want to keep the conversation short, that obviously leaves less room for "character development". Maybe vary the length of dialog a little between characters? Make them use different slang/words to say the same thing to differentiate them further? Maybe have a girl that only goes along once you've convinced another girl? Have a girl that doesn't immediate love inflation after trying it once? Maybe a duo that makes fun of you at first , but ultimately try it on one another, then contacts the MC again to share their experience (maybe one doesn't like it whilst the other is a fan)? What about a university professor that wants to check in on your progress?
Having a girl that resists more can be interesting, your idea is good. The troll was a neat idea! Variation is always good.
I honestly don't have a solution for you, I'm just sharing my thoughts. Personally I like reading a little more to get some story. If that's not your style, that's totally fine. It's your game after all.
