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Thanks for the detailed review! 

I've updated the plaintext PDF with larger leading and spaces between paragraphs, and have removed the leading indents. Cheers!

You're welcome, and thank you! It's lovely to get such a positive and prompt response.

There are still a few formatting quirks that could be improved, if you're interested - details below. 

For example, the smaller text describing the function of Skills is not ideal accessibility-wise (some people struggle to read anything below size 12).

There seem to be various instances where the between-paragraph spacing hasn't applied - I suspect you may have used soft returns, which don't trigger it like hard returns do, but a 'find and replace' may resolve this. You can find some examples in the Inspirations section and Skills section. 

There are also a few cases where indents have remained (see, for example, the bottom paragraph under Skills) - my guess is that these were manually applied using the tab button or spacebar, and will probably need to be manually removed.

Finally, additional spacing below a section heading would ease the reading experience slightly.

Thanks again for taking the time to make edits, it's awesome to see a dev take accessibility seriously! :)

Thank you for taking the time to point out where I fell short here.

Just did another round of passes on this one. Cheers!

Thank you very much for making these edits, this has massively helped my reading experience! :D I'm going to be able to add this to my folder of 'to be played' TTRPGs now, which is awesome!