Nice, I like the way the motif switches between parts, and the breaks it takes to help keep it from getting too stale. Personally I would have liked for some of the instruments to be more present at times. For example, for the drums to speak up by taking those two beats or giving an echoed response to them. There was a lot of clever interweaving in some places though, so it may have not had many opportunities.
Something seems off about the start of the piece, almost like the recording was started a little late - possibly a quirk of MS to work around. I think it came across fine otherwise.
I'm not getting this specific story from the music, although it certainly captures a medieval city vibe. And perhaps that intro section is evocative of the stag? I'm curious to know more about your interpretation.