We've played a couple of your games on my channel so I was hype to try this one out but I think it's my least favorite so far. Game's not that scary or immersive, there's almost no volume/sound effects, and I wasn't that big of a fan of the story.
That said, I see now that you made this in about 3 days just for fun, so I won't be that harsh on it. Keep on making games and I'll keep on playing them king.
Excited to try out Framed Veil!
Here's my playthrough if you're interested, it's the third game starting at 41:55