Good work. I was surprised by the turn it takes at the 52-second mark. The middle part of the song moves away from what you suggest at the beginning and end. It moves away, just like the protagonists of Vitruax. I liked it.
Thanks!.. Yes, the tempo I chose ended up making finding time for transitional language quite difficult XD. The middle section is meant to represent what I viewed as the tragic battle / war between them that I assume caused the outcome from the third panel.
