A nice read, really liked the vibe of the story. Though, the times when we skipped through time didn't really make sense. Because we get a line where it's describing a scene with the 2 mc's 3 months back, and then another line afterwords saying that the relationship started like a month ago.
But other than some logistical queries, I liked everything about this! I like the character designs, the writing style, and good choices in music. Well done and I'm excited to see what other stories you are planning on telling.