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It's a nice little piece, it does mesh pretty well with the first panel - though I would rather have had a more wholistic treatment - in part because of the sharp focus, it giving me rural town / peaceful nature vibes in general. 

I thought the music itself was very nice, but it doesn't  quite work as a loop for me. I saw the idea, but when I looped it, the heavy buildup falls quite suddenly into a very sparse section - needs some tension resolution before looping.

I love the idea of using the image more as an inspirational springboard rather than trying to cover each story beat. Probably a better way to convey the image without crunching on the two minutes.

Thanks, I appreciate it! ☺️👀