Hi, I want to give some feedback on the art, because I think it's really close to being beautiful
- General: Something about the colors is strange---either perhaps because the sun gives everything an orange wash, or just the base colors in general may be too dark, earthy and natural, especially the green floor. I feel it may be better to push the colors towards brighter, simpler primary colors to give the game a friendlier and comical tone to match the art style.
- Albert: The player's colors throw me off as well. The red/orange color is very ambiguous and is similar to the fences, making the player blend in. It also doesn't look great with his blue shirt. It may be better to try a more obvious red or orange, or go with another strong color altogether
- Stella: I also feel the blue hair/black skin doesn't really match. Her hair might look better as white with light blue highlights, or white with light pink highlights
-Agatha: I mean, yeah she looks like a kaffir lime/cucumber :D She also blends in with the background
-All the characters' eyes are really weird if they naturally look up and behind them, I feel they should look forward at all times
Since colors are relative to its neighbors, fixing one or two may fix the rest naturally
I'm not an artist, so take these suggestions lightly, just some things I noticed. Really nice submission