I like the artstyle, and this was well presented. Definitely an eye-catching title too.
I think a little bit of proofreading would have gone a long way, though. The english was kind of clumsy.
about that... I was working with a broken keyboard, so some of the text have missing letter T_T
And also english is not my first language so, both add up
You're right, I need a proofread. Thank you for your feedback :)
