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Hi there! I just want to give some feedback on this fantastic game and I hope it can be helpful to your amazing work. First off, I played the March public version, so if anything has changed in the recent updates, please ignore any comments on that. 

I want to say that, while this trope is usually not my cup of tea, I really like how you implemented the whole Small on Top dynamic and I absolutely love the art, the characters (even the extras!), the worldbuilding and the humor (I spent so much time making sure to check every item in the overworld for hidden gems). Also I just love that this can be actually called a game, if maybe on the easier side. And oh boy, Wulfrick is so precious (and hot ;-)  ), I love him so much! 

Now for the constructive criticism: I really loved the various hot action scenes but sometimes I felt a sense of déjà-vu, especially when it comes to the descriptions of the bottom's well... bottom; also I think the scenes in the first part of the game were somewhat more unique. Lastly I noticed a few typos here and there. While they don’t take away from the overall quality of the game, I’ve compiled a list of the ones I found, and I’d be happy to share it with you privately if you’d like check. I should mention that I’m not a native speaker, so there are some things that I’m not 100% sure about or that might be correct in context, I just thought it might be useful.  

I'd also like to thank Daddy Hyperion for his thorough walkthrough, it was very helpful to make sure I didn't miss anything.

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Thank you very much for your words of appreciation. I also beta-test each new update before release and inform Spedu of any typos I come across, but neither of us are native english speakers ourselves, so stuff's bound to slip past us. Since Spedu can't afford to pay any additional writers or helpers in general (I'm working entirely for free), he relies fully on fans helping out with bugs and typos. The easiest way would be to join Spedu's discord server and post screenshots of the typos you found. Not just the text boxes, the entire screen, so he can tell better where in the game said typo is.

Ok, thank you. I'll try to collect some screenshots but it may take a while.