Writing can go from really good and emotional to a bit scatterbrained and trope heavy but always still works within the style. I don't mind anime shlock but it can be a bit jarring sometimes. Having literally everyone be virgins is a bit much, nobody 20+ cares if women are virgins or not haha, it's a bit unrealistic and idealized to not want them to have ever dated before, feel like the game would even try it with mothers haha but eh, it's a minor gripe, I know young dudes still have that fixation still so most will be into that. But if you're late 20s or 30s and have been dating for decades, women having experience is much better 😂
Fun story, like the main cast, it follows the story beats of MBIML pretty closely but still keeps its own style. There's times dialog hints at things in a way meant to foreshadow or allude to plot points but comes across confusing occasionally but again, minor gripe.
Just like Eternum built on OIAL and blew it out of the water improving on all fronts, I absolutely expect their third game to be amazing since they've improved in writing, scenes and character design so much.