I like the story you have so far. I would have really like to see a bit more concept/inspiration art. I can't look at your document and know the art style that you are going for. I also am not sure from your document what you natural and unnatural disasters are. I think the unnatural is either AI or a lack on environmental education.
Good luck and I look forward to seeing your prototype.
Hello TheImmuneCkay,
Glad to hear you enjoyed the story direction! We put lots of effort into everything. For more concept/inspiration art, I encourage you to check out our game page full of more conceptualization. We weren't able to fit a moodboard onto the required one-page game document, so we stuck to the essentials and filled in from there + linked sources. To clarify about the disasters, there are actually several Natural and UnNatural Disasters, but we showcased sinking cities and generative AI on the doc. The labels for such can be found below the image.
If there is a way we can better communicate this in the future, I'd love to hear any potential suggestions you have! Thank you for checking out Orbyter, and we hope to impress you with our prototype :)) -Rotogi
