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Wow!!! What a powerful impact these 2 new days have on the story. You are truly a great writer.

I would like to go into more details, but I don't want to be a spoiler; so I will try to be vague...

The backstory on Thursday night really fleshes out the character and adds a lot of depth. And Friday morning, the argument is a precursor to just how big a plot point this will become.

Add in a thought of how they knew where they were... and just wow!!! (I can think of at least 3 explanations, 2 quite plausible, all adding flames to the fire.)

Also, yes, I agree with the earlier sentiment of Rachel getting what she deserved.


I crave to see how this continues... ASAP. Unfortunately, I know quality takes time and I will be waiting for months. (and likely that will only be the next step with more twists and plot issues added.)

Keep up the wonderful work!!!

EDIT: And damn... the little devil is hot as hell

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Haha, yeah, I thought she looked great in that last scene! Thanks so much!