The language you use to describe the natural diasters is very poetic, I would love to see if you add some of these elements to the written portions of the game. During the prototype spring you will need to narrow down what exactly the player does to either hurt/heal the enviorment and how. This week, make sure you focus on the more technical aspects of the game because while the aestethics are promising, I want to know hiow this will translate to an interactive medium