Thank you so much, I'm frankly just speechless ❤ This was incredibly validating to read and absorb! You have touched upon so many aspects of writing that I am super conscious about: descriptions, pacing, lore dumps and absence thereof, and of course, emotional beats, so I'm just here kicking my feet over the fact that most of it is landing, it seems? Yay!
I appreciate you taking the time to communicate all this, it made me feel so seen for what I'm trying to achieve with this story!
As I say this, I'm steadily progressing with the next bit of the game, so I hope you enjoy it when it is published!
Thank you again ❤