Man, your stories are so good and wild. This was a very short piece, but it hits hard. I love the abrupt transition between fantasy and reality here, and it is just such an interesting premise, easily the most unique VN I've read so far.
I just want to say your biggest talent is being able to pull at the heartstrings of the reader, drawing them in with the shock value, and keeping them in with the relentless narrative. I am really jealous of your skill at writing in this way.
Dead is Dead was the perfect emotional rollercoaster, and while short, it ended up being the perfect length with what it set out to accomplish. Wonderful job, GatrGroh!