A solid submission for a game jam game - I like the overall pacing of the story and the twist ending as well as all the setup and pay offs throughout the story! My biggest pet peeve was that many choices were not actually choices at all: I was simply choosing if i was continuing the story or ending the story early. If you plan to work on this after the jam, I would look into branching paths and perhaps different story outcomes to flesh out the narrative. Congrats on getting your game finished and submitted!