I'm sorry the relationship with Olivia wasn't clear to you — I'll address that in version 0.2 by adding some kind of hint before her route is officially triggered.
As for the rest, it's true that the ending of the fight between Lilica and Red Mask may have felt overly confusing, what I wanted to showcase was Lilica's overwhelming superiority against her opponent. Being strong enough to pierce someone with the blunt end of her hammer felt cool and also a bit comedic as I was making the scene.
And Gerry I just wanted him to play the part of an underdog... He appears weak and pathetic but he's desperate for a big break. I get that it's not clearly shown yet but I'll keep an eye out on these sort of things in the future so that it's explained in a better way to the reader!
That said, thank you so much for trying out version 0.1 — we promise you'll be getting 0.2 sooner rather than later.