That was awesome! Very promising indeed; I will be waiting for future updates.
I'm not that picky when it comes to visual novels, but I really appreciate a good writing style and interesting characters from the get-go. It felt natural; you don't know everything about your character or the world around you, just a few bits and pieces or guess the context. Characters explain it to you themselves and you don't have to read another lore book to know what's happening.
Usually, only one or two characters are fleshed out, but here I wanted to explore everything possible, which is rare for me. Tulemeni,Bromm and Zuberi have my heart.
Definitely will be waiting for more. I had big Mass Effect vibes while playing; I fricking love sci-fi! Just don't overwork yourself.