This one's really a mixed bag. There are a lot of good ideas in here. I like the concept of the tyrannical king and a rotting kingdom, and there could be a lot of interesting things done with that. I also think the demon concept is really interesting and could interplay with the first idea. But they're kinda sidelined when we have alone time with the My Wolf, making those plot concepts feel like background details rather than serious plot ideas. Don't get me wrong, I think the interactions with the wolf are sweet and cute, but the first half really could have benefited from being its own standalone story. As it stands, the two halves of the VN don't connect very well with each other. I commend people for doing their art, coming from someone who does the art for every VN I make, as it's not very easy to do that while also writing the VN. Unfortunately, the sprites lack expressions, and every single one of them has the same standard pose. If you view the story as someone having a moment of joy in a doomed situation, then it's decent, but could have been better. However, I'd encourage the writer to make another VN in the same setting to explore some of the more interesting ideas that didn't have the chance to shine.