Really interesting premise here! Going from the imaginary world to the real world and vice-versa was really well done: BGS, sprite and music working in concert. The characters are nice, the writing is pretty good. I felt the story was cut a bit short but at the same time, not sure what else to add. And while I get feeling a sense of closure and stuff at the end, seeing a brighter future still seems a bit incongruous in that situation… The presentation is neat. As I said, the transition between the two “worlds” works very well. The dead sprite edit looks good, but I don’t get why he’s missing part of his arm? Overall, I quite liked it, but it was missing a little je ne sais quoi.