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Thanks for your insightful insights :vv about the prose and imagery. I tried my best but only further writing experience can patch this one I fear 🤭🤭.

For the connections between characters, I thought that developing their relationship too fast will feel unrewarding, and maybe I had held back too much. (I could’ve made the replays a different experience altogether but after writing 1 route, the word counts says no 😔)

Plot-wise, I really could have characterized their relationship better through the routes, though I do think those flashbacks are enough to piece together what is their relationship (because rearranging it in the right order spells out a rough timeline already). Perhaps another scene would’ve been better than that second postscript im ngl (I could’ve written a wedding omlll)

For the NVL…uh I really didn’t notice that 💀. I checked like quite a few times thinking I might’ve missed something and it still eludes me in the end.