Hello! Thank you for taking the time and reading!
Honestly the thumbnail was rushed, so the comedic aspect of it was unintentional lmao.
I don't find it disrespectful at all! I'm glad people found humor in it!
I agree completely with what you said, the story lacked many basic elements to make the story flow. Most of those elements I didn't include because of my own faults. So thank you for helping me see what this story needs!
I'm glad you had fun with the story and I'm definitely going to continue working on my stuff in the future! Thank you once again!