I was really looking forward to this :) I agree with the others that it's sad to be so short but it's also clear by the quality of the images and animations that a great deal of hard work went into it (such as Marcus' endowment.) :D
I do feel bad for Marcus. I pretty much saw what he's going through play out in real time some years ago. No matter how amicable such situations may end up being, no one walks away unscathed and the heartbreak of at least one of them tends to be extreme. While I hope Marcus finds his own footing and happiness, I highly doubt it'll be with Daniel. Nothing wrong with dalliance, though.
On the page after the story where you can select a chapter or a scene, is there a button I'm not seeing or way to exit that screen and close? I had to enter a chapter, *then* hit the Title menu to exit.
I'm looking forward to the next installment. :)