Well I played through the current version. Yes, it's early days, so there's not a whole lot There but it's very clear to see that there is a lot of lore and world world building already. If you are of the type of person that likes story first, then this is definitely one to keep an eye on.
Only a couple of things wouldn't mind seeing father's gift actually presented and a little bit of dialogue Around the mc's mindset on his thoughts on using it.
There was one and line of dialogue on the island where the game refers to the. Mc, as the default name, even if you changed it.
Finally, the parts of the dialogue where a character is whispering. Just add that they are whispering and make the dialogue Bigger, because I have my laptop hooked up to a fifty five inch screen tv, and I still have to squint and lean forward to read it.
Beyond all that, I'd say you're doing good work and have a great story on your hands. I greatly look forward to seeing this story Play out.