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Well I played through the current version. Yes, it's early days, so there's not a whole lot There but it's very clear to see that there is a lot of lore and world world building already. If you are of the type of person that likes story first, then this is definitely one to keep an eye on. 


Only a couple of things wouldn't mind seeing father's gift actually presented and a little bit of dialogue Around the mc's mindset on his thoughts on using it.


There was one and line of dialogue on the island where the game refers to the. Mc, as the default name, even if you changed it. 


Finally, the parts of the dialogue where a character is whispering. Just add that they are whispering and make the dialogue Bigger, because I have my laptop hooked up to a fifty five inch screen tv, and I still have to squint and lean forward to read it. 


Beyond all that, I'd say you're doing good work and have a great story on your hands. I greatly look forward to seeing this story Play out.

Thank you for the good feedback!

Next update is planned to be a lot meatier in terms of content, since now I have a lot of the groundwork laid out in terms of things like UI and a load of the backend stuff. There's a lot of concepts to the worldbuilding, and I'm generally trying to avoid as much raw exposition dump as possible, so it's all gonna be rolled out over the first few updates whilst I'm introducing characters.

Playtesting is a difficult thing, since it's just me working on the whole thing. At a certain point once you've read the entire thing enough times, it kinda all blends together, but I'll make sure to iron those kinds of issues out on the next update.