They're coming to get you, Barbara...
Don't have much to say about this one. I watched a stream of this on the FVN server, and it looked pretty interesting. The writing's pretty simple, although it didn't catch my eye that much. The main draw of this VN is definitely the gameplay. It certainly looks like there was a lot of thought put into it, and there are a bunch of neat ideas put into it, but it's definitely unpolished. The ideas that are there are good, but it feels a little underbaked at the moment. Something to consider developing more.