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A short and impactful story, and also one of the best MayWolf entry this year. The story manages to be really creative with just one scene (and one* sprite). I love the interconnected use of ‘You’ and ‘I’, really gives a sense of not being in reality. The writing was amazing, giving enough room for me to keep up despite alternating between You/I and Jes,Bel/with their real counterparts.
For the presentation, the music is fine, though I don’t think it necessarily fits too well. Another thing, is the differing static audio intentional? I can barely hear the static from ‘Light’ even with max setting while ‘Bel’ and him are wayy louder than the rest. Also the last instance of Bel and Jez does not have that static, which I’d assume is Remy not being to differentiate between fake and real for that one second, though I’d love some type of clarification on that (maybe like one line asking are you real?) or sth idk. The shift between the spiraling to the sudden ‘Remy, I’m not real’ is sort of sudden, but it do be like that sometimes.
P.S I ran out of witty comments :(, I guess I’ll just become another one of those meat with nervous tissues.
Rating: 5545
Edit: Rebalancing of rating to 5555