Idk if I can rate this entry seriously tbh...
It’s a kink piece with some plot in it. And well even if some scenes are admittedly kinda hot 😅😅, I still prefer the plot heavy latter half. The story spread wasn’t equal, and the dialogue isn’t great (though it got a few laughs out of me for how silly it is). The characters themselves aren’t great either, mainly because they feel a bit too two dimensional (with the exception of the wolf) and I expected for there to be a bit more…oomph at the killings reveal and all that came after (given MC’s motivation for saving the wolf was because he thinks physical abuse is never justified, and the killings was more of revenge instead of self defense)…but maybe I shouldn’t read into it too much.
Presentation, it has funny scenes, it has horny scenes, and the bright red flash in the middle of the story that hurts my eye :<. The prose wasn’t done well, but the focus is the horny anyway. You could say that this is a Maywolf entry of all time (for what is to be discovered).
Theme, I don’t really see it even though it’s flat out told to you in the story. MC (kind of) saves wolf from circumstances and he fell into a similarly dire circumstance. And now MC is probably busy lovestruck for nearly forever -.-
P.S The second the dragon came on screen I prepared like 40 sex jokes to put in this section but alas he gone -.- So I will put a suggestion instead. The main menu screen after the game has a lot of changes namely the boards don’t light up, there’s no escort, MC crying. I think you could also make it so that it’s night to reference the line about looking at the moon everyday.
Rating: 2234
Edit: Rebalancing of rating to 2334