I think my favorite of the Jam so far. The anguish that comes with personally destroying the one place of solace you had.
Enjoyed the laying down of rules for the fantasy world and how those rules hinted at the overall concept the VN was working with. Then using those rules to break the MC. I appreciate that fucked up thing happened and not everything turns out happy. I especially loved the section where MC compares himself to a god and comes to the realization that any creator being should have love for his creations. Creative way to have some deconstruct harmful parts of organized religion.
No notes really. A tight script and clear messaging. The heavy parts hit heavy and all in all a devastating read.