Games like this one are why I continue to wade through the garbage heap that is the visual novel tag. Great work; I look forward to the full game.
A few things:
- Some dialogue boxes have names when they shouldn't and vice versa. The names sometimes don't work properly either; Dorothy's name changing to Mary after scrolling up and Vein's name being "???" for her entire introductory scene were the big ones that I noticed.
- The MC's personality is all over the place. They go from a spineless wimp in the first half to spitting game at Tempest and Vein within a few in-game days. I found it odd.
- Vein's face gives me Butch Hartman vibes, especially her open mouth smile. Her character is great, but her art sticks out to me.