Loved the music and the idea and I think that detail of adding the pictures to the background once you collect them is a great way to also show you are progressing in the game <3 I felt a bit lost on why should avoid hitting the red boxes as there were no lifes but, I see that it destroys the picture you are about to pickup. Also found a bit difficult to read the text while dodging.
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Thanks for the review!
The red boxes are mainly made to destroy the pictures(Maybe I should make an indicator of when it actually goes into effect), and has no other uses. I was running out of the time to make an intro screen so it was just a makeshift solution. Trijams can be really challenging in time management, and that is an imperfection from my game which reflects it haha.
With my text based games, I usually overcomplicate the gameplay and the text...for this particular game, when a text is being displayed, the red boxes have no effects(I should clarify that in hindsight!).
Also I noticed a lot of compliments on music haha. It was made by Edward Brauns III(Who also made amazing music for a couple of other games). I think he has his youtube linked on his itch page for more music(I think).
Thanks again!