The rules of the puzzle could obviously do with a clearer explanation but you didn't fail at all and like I said it's a really cute idea for a mini-game that's casually engaging and fits perfectly in the story/world. I totally think it's worth tweaking for future iterations of this series. I'm a little bit biased of course but to me video games are way more than traditional notions of gameplay. You clearly have a talent for storytelling in this medium and if people are missing that because of a confusing but totally workable puzzle then that's their loss :P And yes I remember seeing episode 1 in that video I was really happy when it came up!! Very well deserved.
I missed out on Brackey's 25.1 being busy with uni but I'm gonna do everything in my power to set aside time for 25.2 :} Whatever project you end up doing for it I'm really excited to see!!
And thank you so much!! I was really happy with how BLOODSONG turned out, super eerie and bleak. My next big goal with my projects is to create something larger and more comprehensive that I can release to Steam but it's a lot of work and I seem to have less and less time for these things. Also I'm useless with marketing myself and my art so I'll have to work that out too. I love working on shorter contained stories and fleshing out their weird, fucked up worlds but I definitely feel like it's time for me to step up my game... no pun intended :9