Spoiler Alert!
What can I say, it’s cute it’s cool it’s awesome. The plot is simple but fun to read through, and there was some conflict and mystery going on near the start of the VN. I hoped the conflict would be a bit more nuanced tho, cause it seemed to be resolved with like 2 or 3 sentences from Crystal and then Chang’e straight up tells you what’s up (which is fine, but I felt it wasn’t as rewarding).
For the presentation…OH MY GOD THE PRESENTATION THEY’RE SO CUTEEEEE. We all cheered when the married CG came on screen. The bgs are cool, and the sprite are very flexible (they move everywhere and that’s very cool). The music could use some variation, and in some cases, silence would help (mostly at the start of the VN). Some sfx would be cool, like firewords noises and some nyoom from the magic spells.
P.S MC…So small and cuddly <333333 Them wolves must be protected at all costs >:o
Rating: 3444
Edit: Rebalancing of rating to 3454