Thanks for notifying me. It's a lot of text and these things can and will slip through. If or when you find another one just let me know and I'll fix them for the next update.
there is a typo when she is doing chores on the farm "She spends the whole afternoon doing various odjobs around the farm" odjobs should be odd jobs. When talking to the captain in the hometown he says "U will have to look for yourself Ms. Neel. I believe you to be a young, capable woman who can search for her sister without needing our help." U should be you. When talking to the church with Julia "Do you know anything about Kira that might help us find her? Anything unusal about her when she stayed here or when she left? unusal should be unusual. When Zara directs you to talk to Oliva "And when you prove yourself capable then we can discuss the Lord's path propper" propper should be proper. "Emily's though" should be Emily's thoughts. When Emily is dream masturbating "To be swept away by the rivers of exctasy and pure bliss." exctasy should be ecstasy. also during that "I need to pull myslef together." myslef should be myself. "just sleep, no immoral thoughs. thoughs should be thoughts. "Emily falls asleep managing to supress her feelings" supress should be suppressing.