As I'm not a Tennis Ace reader, bear with me :sob:
One of the longer entries but with a simple plot (leaving those word count for sex eh?). The story has very uhh (kind of) jarring shifts between comedy and horniness. Well, half of the time the joke is sex and the other half is the realistic animal sprites. There’s not a lot to say about the plot, and the story can basically be summed up into one or two sentences.
For presentation, I was gagged at the main menu background (but if somehow fits cuz in the end Haruki gets no sex scene but is with Yuuichi lol). The music is kind of there, nothing too special and I question the usage of CG in the sex scene with the coach. The longer, more meaty part of the scene is black while the scene before it was the CG. You should proofread your writing in the VN form because there’s more than one time the text went over the quick menu buttons (5 lines) and once where the text literally went off screen (6 lines). There are not many grammatical error that I noticed, but you are missing some commas at the line’s end.
Theme. Yuuichi was unsure of his sexuality (and his kinks?) so he went to find it. Clear ‘Light in the Dark’ theme, present throughout the story.
P.S So…older men, huh.
Rating: 4232