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Here I make the list of the typo hope this help. 

This child better not be like "hers" father the beginning scene where MC's Grandfather recite poet. 

"Hers" name is Li Yi Ping (my MC name) Ruolan introduced MC to her mother. 

The thoughts lasted for a long time, until she finally came to the decision of not hiding anything from "him".(My MC is Female)

the only thing missing was the presence of "RUolan". Scene after tiger hunt. 

{b}KNOCK KNOCK{/b} scene after moving to Palace, maybe you wanted to make this Bold letter perhaps?. 

Raise your head "yound" lady,  scene in Ruolan Party. If you pick accept her apology. 

"That kid Li Yi Ping, she will get herself into some big trouble someday if she's not careful with "hers" tongue." Lu Zhou said. 

who's currently riding your horse with your daughter, scene if MC decide to stay in town to help. 

Not sure if she can trust the little on horse. This maybe missing something maybe author wanted to insert mistress here or girl or child? 

from "their" you will no longer have to worry about the world if you are strong. Maybe the author meant there? 

We need to use yin energy to slow it, then use "(XXX) to" slowly drain all the blood from the infected part and hope it hasn't touched any vitals yet. The original sentence lack something I think. 

Or if you rich enough then just buy an "elixier" and cure it instantly. Just pointing it out it if that's what really the name of the cure instead of elixir. 

you can see "the" through everything. The for what? Maybe them? Theirs? Scene when MC walks to arena to spar. 

accepts "hers" defeat or is unable to fight. Commentary before the fight with elder. 

To win disciple Li Yi Ping will have to make elder Mo Bin acknowledge "his" strength. My MC is female. 

There are many eyes in the "audiance" who now see you as a threat. Bit typo there. 

Yes, I'm the choice after sleeping the day after, maybe author meant I am.

 Go with RUolan, the option for visiting illegal underground fight club. 

I know since she's your sister you think highly of "him", chat with Li Hua in the underground arena. 

I don't "hers" martial skills because she's my sister, probably need to fix this reply from Ruolan need to add doubt and fix the hers. 

you see "sever" shops on your way to the auction hall. Something missing maybe several? 

but it appears since your "arriver" in the sect was unusual they forget to check on you. 

Not only wang family have strong cultivators but they are also known for their "strategiest". Maybe Plot? Scheme? Strategy seems too upright of a word for this nefarious dude. 

"He" must be here to court death. Murmurs from the crowd I presume? Before MC get to arena. 

 brat defeat a never "loosing" champion. May I suggest the undefeatable? Than never losing? 

A not even half his age, cutting down all the people he felt safe with here just now, the event in the island, something is missing probably a child?

Noticed that the option to reply to Ruolan is rarely using honorific like sister, in society where status and position is kinda big deal maybe reader should have option for polite reply, instead of "what you want", maybe there is option for casual polite reply like " What happen, Sister? " Or " What's going on sis? ", maybe author could insert playful reply like " Now sis what do you want from the old me " Grinning. 

I like this small act of kindness Author put on the story, like the old blind man, the old woman that fell into river, the old man and his daughter, pushing the unwanted child to find her courage and confident to confront the world, I feel this is person that really need kindness the most and they rarely get it, hopefully there will be more interaction like this, changing world one step at the time one small kindness prevent the world turn cold.

I am sorry I don't know how to edit it may be make it like smaller.